I like this poem. I like when a poem makes the audience look within themselves. The last line is a little vague. Not sure if it has a grammar error, but something about it is a little off. Otherwise great job!
This is a wonderful poem!
Your poem is very outspoken. I like how it starts off with questions about the reader.
I like this poem. I like when a poem makes the audience look within themselves. The last line is a little vague. Not sure if it has a grammar error, but something about it is a little off. Otherwise great job!
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ReplyDeleteYour poem is very outspoken. I like how it starts off with questions about the reader.
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