Tuesday, July 1, 2014

Only He Knows Me



This is my life

Is there something wrong with it

This is my heart

Do you understand it

I know I have faults

But I say this, during this test

There is but one

Who knows me the best


2 comments:

  1. Great poem. You brought me in, but kind of left me hanging. I would love to know who knows you best. Cliff hangers are good, when the audience thinks about something that is reflecting on their character or something that they can answer. In other words, you should only do rhetorical questions or statements which are cliff hangers.

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  2. who knows you? describe yourself and be proud of who you are> great poem!!!

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